History 17B

West Valley College

ESSAY ASSIGNMENT

Welcome to your paper assignment!!!

The history of the Cold War is a stark reminder of how Americans have often struggled to find a balance between maintaining in a liberal democracy and protecting it from forces that seek to subvert it (indeed, we are having this same debate today over how to fight the war on terrorism!)  As Ellen Schrecker explains in The Age of McCarthyism, many Americans were persecuted during this Cold War period because they held unpopular beliefs. While some may certainly have been intent on subverting American democracy, many others were not.

Assignment

Your assignment is to compare and contrast three arguments presented in Schrecker's book:  J. Edgar Hoover's testimony to Congress (Document 4), Sidney Hook's "Cold War Liberal View of the Communist Threat" (Document 21), and Supreme Court Justice William O. Douglas' belief in "The Black Silence of Fear" (Document 22).  Based on your readings of Schrecker, you must critically evaluate what these authors are saying.  For instance, is Hoover exaggerating the threat?  Does Douglas underestimate the threat?  Is there really a difference between conspiracy and heresy as Hook argues?  Which author do you agree with, and why?

Length:  Your essay should be at least 3 FULL PAGES and NO LONGER than 4 pages (double spaced).  This is tough for some students who like to write, and write, and write...without really saying a whole lot.  The page length requires you to get to the point of your argument.  And your essays must be typed!

Compare and Contrast Checklist:

Have you opened with an introduction that lays out what this review essay seeks to accomplish?

Is there a good hook that catches the interest of the reader of your paper from the very beginning?

Have you fully explained the three author's positions?

Have you used specific examples to illustrate their arguments? (And have you brought in examples from throughout the book?)

Have you cited those examples with page numbers?

Have you analyzed what the specific differences of these authors are?   (Comparing is easy; make sure you also contrast!)

Have you stated to the reader who you believe offers the most persuasive argument and why?

Do you have a conclusion that sums up the paper?

Have you proofread your paper for grammatical and spelling errors?

How to Write This Paper

Students often assume that a compare and contrast essay only needs a summary of the three articles and a conclusion that sums up their own position.  THIS IS A FALSE ASSUMPTION!!!  A compare and contrast essay needs to show the reader exactly where the authors agree and disagree.  Thus you should write your paper in a point-counterpoint format.  For instance:  

"In regards to the first point, Author 'X' believes this, but Authors 'Y' and 'Z' counters with  this.  Author 'Y' has the upper hand because....  As to the second point, Author 'X' argues...."  

In this way, you are drawing out specific points from their debate, laying them side by side, and showing their contrasting positions.


Using Quotes and Plagiarism

I DO want you to use lots of examples from Schrecker and the documents (AND CITE THOSE EXAMPLES WITH A PAGE NUMBER), but I DO NOT want you to use any quotes!!!  All examples should be substantially paraphrased in your own words.  And don't take anything from Wikipedia or other online resources (and I will find out).  If you are just lifting sentences out of these documents (or any online resources) without paraphrasing them, you will receive an "F" on your paper for plagiarism, and possibly an "F" in the class for gross infractions of this rule.   Don't test me on this.  EVERY semester I fail one or more students for plagiarism (no lie!)  DON'T BE ONE OF THEM!!!

PROOFREAD and "spell check" your work as spelling and grammatical errors will affect the overall presentation of your essay - and thus your overall grade.  A paper that is filled with grammatical, punctuation, and/or spelling errors will NOT pass.

Submitting Your Paper:  Attach your paper as a MS-Word document and e-mail it to either my Angel account or the history17b_wvc@yahoo.com account.  ALSO, paste your paper into the body of the e-mail message as a back up measure (sometimes Word docs don't open if they are old versions).

Due Dates:  SATURDAY, April 14 by 11:59 pm.

Late policy:  Papers are marked down 1/3 of a grade each day that they are late.  Late papers are defined as those which reach me after 11:59 on the date they are due.

Points:  250 points